MÅrena Ryan, I hope you are having a fantastic day!
My name is Eliza and I’m working as a blog commenter on the Summer Learning Journey this summer. Have you done the Summer Learning Journey before? I’m looking forward to reading your posts and the other bloggers' posts from the Ako Hiko cluster, over the next few weeks! If you want to know more about me, you can check out my blog.
Well done on making an awesome genially about Lorde! I like how interactive it is - clicking on the icons to find the facts was fun! It’s cool how you’ve added a link to one of Lorde’s music videos, and your facts are interesting - thanks for sharing those. Did you know that Lorde has a net worth of $12 million dollars!? Were there any other facts you learned about Lorde, that you didn’t use on your blog? I also saw you mentioned Ariana Grande - do you enjoy her music? I think she is pretty talented!
Next time you do a genially or a poster, it would be good to have a bold title that says the name of the person you’re talking about e.g ‘Lorde’. This would make it easier for the viewer of your blog to know exactly who you are talking about when they first look at it :)
I actually went to the same school as Lorde and we lived on the same road for a little while, she is one year younger than me. She is a really nice person and I remember her always being very talented at school. Do you have a favourite Lorde song?
I hope that you will keep blogging with us over the summer. Keep working on the teaser week activities and on the 16th of December you can start the Week 1 activities.
Thank you so much for making a blog post and keep up the great mahi! Eliza :)
MÅrena Ryan, I hope you are having a fantastic day!
ReplyDeleteMy name is Eliza and I’m working as a blog commenter on the Summer Learning Journey this summer. Have you done the Summer Learning Journey before? I’m looking forward to reading your posts and the other bloggers' posts from the Ako Hiko cluster, over the next few weeks! If you want to know more about me, you can check out my blog.
Well done on making an awesome genially about Lorde! I like how interactive it is - clicking on the icons to find the facts was fun! It’s cool how you’ve added a link to one of Lorde’s music videos, and your facts are interesting - thanks for sharing those. Did you know that Lorde has a net worth of $12 million dollars!? Were there any other facts you learned about Lorde, that you didn’t use on your blog? I also saw you mentioned Ariana Grande - do you enjoy her music? I think she is pretty talented!
Next time you do a genially or a poster, it would be good to have a bold title that says the name of the person you’re talking about e.g ‘Lorde’. This would make it easier for the viewer of your blog to know exactly who you are talking about when they first look at it :)
I actually went to the same school as Lorde and we lived on the same road for a little while, she is one year younger than me. She is a really nice person and I remember her always being very talented at school. Do you have a favourite Lorde song?
I hope that you will keep blogging with us over the summer. Keep working on the teaser week activities and on the 16th of December you can start the Week 1 activities.
Thank you so much for making a blog post and keep up the great mahi!
Eliza :)